Hi Anushka! I really enjoyed reading your paper. I particularly like how you took a different approach than most and focused on developing a global mindset as opposed to focusing on global/local citizenship. It was very interesting to hear about your background and you smoothly explained how your environment and experiences as you grew up translate into your beliefs about unity and global equity. I also really like that you included quotes from the Upanishads, it really solidifies how your religion ties into your argument and provides more clarity. The examples about the persecution of Muslims in China also really helps prove your argument and makes your article stronger.

Overall this paper is great! I really like the quote "In our world, it seems that a nation's capital and political power is fundamentally more important than the protection of all human rights under a globally equal mindset..." in the second to last paragraph. I think it would be interesting to hear more about that point specifically, as its a strong point and it can help add to your argument. Great work!