Hey Evan! I think this is a great article and that you provided very clear points that helped explain why you identify as a local citizen. You give very specific details that backup your main point which helps strengthen your article. The addition of some stats and pictures also helps add to the article. I like how you split the different aspects of Houston into different paragraphs, it gives the article more structure and it makes it easy to follow. I think you can expand more upon your personal experience in Houston. You give a lot of information about the city and the aspects of being apart of Houston, but what is your personal connection and how do you tie into that? I think that would be interesting to read about and that would help add more to your article. I also agree with Ziyao's point and that it would be a good idea to define the term global identity and why you think you identify more locally.