Hey Ethan! I really enjoyed reading about your background and your personal experiences and how that contributes to your main argument. I enjoyed how you tied in the idea of deciding between Taiwanese and Chinese and the idea that global citizenship is a way of thinking.

I also really enjoyed your tiktok analogy, it's an out of the box example that really helps convey your argument. I think you could also expand on your counterargument and provide a more specific rebuttal.